The Tragedy of Nepal 2011

A deep depression hit me about an hour into my visit to Nepal and lasted for the first two weeks. Nepal, as a travel destination, is nothing short of raved about. “The Himalayan Mountains are majestic and the people are the nicest in the world!” was a common travel tidbit I heard. What I found was a developing nation with deep problems becoming worse by the month with tourism hastening the poisoning of the well. The pollution is the worst I have ever seen. Air, land, sound and water, nothing is spared the careless trash. The people are wonderful and also skillful about exploiting the tourist scene. Everyone you meet has a friend that is in the business of what you want to do, and they have a vested commission in getting you to open up.

Kathmandu, Thamel

So much of this place is changing, generally for the worse. You can see the mountains from Pokhara, but the smog makes the view, well, depressing. Kathmandu is thriving from tourism, but at the expense of the country workers leaving to find easier work (and often times they can’t get it, resorting to black market and corrupt jobs).

The horns on the motorbikes are non-stop. The taxis will take you for a ride and to your destination. They view cheating tourists as a right, a recent newspaper article boasts.

“Merry Christmas, sir!” a 10-year-old boy told me. “Would you like some weed?”

I wanted to leave within a week of getting here. Let me rephrase that: I wanted to leave and start a campaign to stop tourism in Nepal. There was no redeeming value. It was soulless, corrupt and destroying everyone that touched it. Not something I want to be supporting, in reality or my dreams.

“Merry Christmas, sir!” a older man told me later in the frigid night.

“Need a cute girl? Bang bang.”

Vendor outside the bus

City is city. I get this. This happens. Pollution happens. Black markets happen. My dream of this place happened, and it was far, far off from what actually is here. The political democracy is on a thread, and a saving grace is the blancas that come here to spend their money. Nepal is developing, there is no doubt of that.

The bus ride from Kathmandu to Pokhara is a very direct reminder of how developing the country is. More than 10 police checkpoints stop every car, bike and bus to check permits and tolls. A six-hour ride passed (formerly) amazing views of valleys, rivers and mountains. There is also a police paddy wagon arresting vendors, drunks and teens (by random it seems). The motorbikes don’t obey the road closure rules and honk at the mob walking down the street. “Get out of my way!” their imported ultra-loud horns say.

Nepal Roadside

Everything seems to be just this: an urgent cry. The rural areas of Nepal, I shall learn, are extreme in their land and experience. I met a mother that had 12 children living, and had buried eight. The eyes of people around town are full of salesmanship or despair. An old lady sells me some beads, which are made by hand and support her family trapped in Tibet.

“That is full of shit!” my guide tells me, yelling at the widow. She scatters, and I am told that the beads are from China, and she just does what sells to the tourists.

Everything isn’t as it seems. Isn’t how I fell in love with Nepal. The lore just doesn’t match up.

Time to get out of the city. Annapurna Circuit is on my life list. 220 miles circumventing some of the tallest mountains in the world. Every town along the way has tea houses to welcome the trekkers (60,000 strong per year as of 2009). Wilderness, I hoped.

As with most of my hopes in Nepal, it was quickly smashed. There isn’t much sense of wilderness here. Can we make money off it?

Develop it. Rice fields can fit on most hillsides, put them in. Trash was everywhere (and not tourist trash, local trash was the stuff on the ground). You can see why: A young girl asks every trekker for chocolate as they walk by. She unwraps it, eats a bit and drops the wrapper on the trails. This joins the 10-50 pieces of trash per 10 yards of the trail. The full Annapurna Circuit is 220 miles, and at that estimate, we are looking at 352,000 to 1,760,000 pieces of trash on the trail.

Wilderness. Nepal’s tourism is built on the trekking. You pay a visa fee on entry to the county, and a “conservation fee” for the assumed conservation. Nowhere to be found.

The dark secret of wilderness around the world is that the land is usually not developed because it is too hard to profit off of. The Himalayas are off limits, but the wooded areas around it are not protected.

The tea houses in towns welcoming you? They are just hotels, built for the trekkers. There isn’t much past the towns, other than the hotels. In most we visited, there wasn’t anything besides that.

River Crossing In Nepal

Trekking on the most hated road in the world. The road.

  • Day 1 The road!
  • Day 2 The road.
  • Day 3 The fucking road.
  • Day 4 The fucking road destroying this place.
  • Day 5 The fucking road built by children destroying this place.
  • Day 6 The fucking road build by children destroying this place and eating the soul of all around.
  • Day 7 The inevitable road.

The Fucking Road

The road is going in at the strong urging or citizens of Manang. There are 3000 full-time residents, and with stories of hundreds of children being saved with a modern road in and out, convinced the government to put in a road. The road conveniently goes exactly on top of the trekking trail. Where the road is built, the trail is gone.

Wilderness.

Now, if you are a person that can do third grade math, you can figure out that the road will carry, at capacity, the same amount of tourists that currently hike on the trail (averaged out).  One car per three minutes with eight passengers on a road that is unstable at best.

The guiding services expect trekking to go up when the road is completed. On day six, right past Tal, we saw the road being jackhammered into the hillside. “Awful young,” I thought. “It is a good job” my guide said (as the last official thing said as my guide). We passed a group of 20 youth, aged 6-10, high up on a hillside clearing the blasted land from the army. The tourist funded army. Yes, come to the mountains, and see the whites of the eyes of the child labor you are supporting.  I’ve never seen eyes so cold.  So hurt.  So helpless.  They are doing a very hard job, unsupervised, with almost no pay as a replacement of their childhood.

My guide learned a valuable lesson about unfair and dangerous jobs: If you support it, you can lose yours.

If you hike the Annapurna, you support, directly, child labor. They might hide it during the high-season, but the ugly and shameful beast is there. The knock-off brand-name jacket you bought in Kathmandu are made by a different tragic set of small hands.

Wilderness.

We are in the last years of the Annapurna being a place where people trek. The inevitable road is set to be finished in 2014, with buses and jeeps honking and smoking up the valley. They are aiming to have 150 vehicles per section, per day. To my surprise, they don’t expect trekking to go down.

The powerlines cover the entire valley until Manang. A 42″ flatscreen TV is displayed in the kitchen/bedroom/bathroom of a teahouse. The fire rages on, but with no chimney smoke hangs at waist level. The 10 people in the room don’t seem to mind, but their daily environment is killing them. We pay our conservation fund-approved menu meals and hike on. The road is the only way to get up the valley, conveniently, to the next town. Let me Photoshop the power line out of that pristine Himalayan view.

I sit down in Manang for a veggie curry. I’m excited to meet the residents of the town that resulted in one of the classic hikes in the world becoming a jeep trail. I was quickly joined, at 11am no less, by a group of five drunk and high business owners. The all too familiar get-to-know-the-tourist-before-selling-them-shit game is played. It is around zero outside. No insulation to be found. This week, eight Nepali die due to the cold.

“You want good weed, you come to Karma.”

The inevitable road is being built and supporting this, and this alone. There is a small town that used to be here. It has been swallowed up by the tourist trash, forever gone. The army is blasting an amazing amount of rock into the river below.

I’m learning the hard lesson of how tourism can destroy.

It is January. It is the coldest week of the year. It is 14,000 feet above sea level, and there is no snow. We walk over the 17,769-foot pass without stepping in a spot of snow. The glaciers have receded back as far as they can without disappearing. We make it over the pass. It is one of the slowest days for traffic on the pass, an officer tells us days later. Six people, guides included. “In October you can see 1,000.”

The majestic Nepal is dead to me, to a lot of people, many of which live here.

Throng La Pass Nepal Summit

After the trek, the papers read of the risk of a political uprising. It is “tourism year,” so the Maoists are pretending to agree to not do anything for 2011, but not many believe that. Opportunities for visas for workers wanting to slave away in foreign lands are crowded in the paper. Only 320 died last year in Quatar. A paraglider died yesterday less than a mile from where I type.

The opportunities are depressing. The government is depressing. The people have lived through hell and are seeing their country being built into a three-star hotel for assholes like me to come and experience their Himalayan dream. With more than 30% of the children not attending school, the government focuses on tourism in 2011.  I don’t how this will help the core problems, major problems, at all.  It will only hurt more.

I’ve never felt dirtier as a traveler.

I found many things in this country to be urgent cries. Perhaps this is mine.

More photos from this trip can be found here. I also wrote a separate piece with my positive stories from Nepal.  I decided on the trail that these two had no business being published in the same post.


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233 responses to “The Tragedy of Nepal 2011”

  1. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    The TV comment was meant to show that even though some technology was
    there, simple needs were looked over (a chimney). Living and sleeping
    in a smoke filled room is going to kill the entire family but they can
    watch Indian soap operas.

    Would have loved to get off the track, and indeed I tried. Not
    knowing anyone (like you) living off of the places you mentioned I
    talked to six guides / services, none of which would go outside the
    Annapurna / Everest regions.

    Will tourism help Nepal get out of the current situation? I do not
    think so. It will become far more violent, polluted and crowded in
    the cities (a conclusion I come to with a heavy heart).

  2. Vuckroger Avatar
    Vuckroger

    So sorry for this bad experienced you had… None is untrue, but for those who never experienced Nepal it is the arsh way you describe the facts. You just forgot to mention the good stuff, unless you were so deep in the shit of your depression that you forgot to take the time to stop the “critique” and really enjoy and understand a different culture, a new democracy with all its problems and the daily life of the nepalese trying to adapt to a new world that is just opening in front.

    Perhaps this cames has a warning for those who travel to countries and don’t spend enough time checking and preparing for the cultural gap between occident and India-like countries.

    Perhaps you forgot to mention the contrast between the deep jungle and the mountains. And Nepal is (right now) a country like its geography… between the forest and the mountains. Once I understand this, I should be able to appreciate it a lot more!

  3. Yunesh Subedi Avatar
    Yunesh Subedi

    I am sorry that the writer had such experience for some reason but i believe there is positive n negative aspects in everything n it matters what u r digging for. Everything that is expressed in this article is very negative which in itself is a big cynicism. Everyone knows it is a commercial world so everyone is selling same things in different pakages around the world saying thousand things which may or may not be true but if u like it u go for n if u dont’t just quit. Come on these days everywhere in the world there is violence, prostitutes, bad politics, drugs n so on, it is just not only Nepal!!!! You get what u want to c. Everything in this article is potrayed negatively the girl asking choclate, woman trying to sell beads, the polite speaking people as vested interested people trying to swindle n etc, i mean what’s wrong in that. They r not shooting, bashing,stealing or going around with sucide boms killing thousand people right, they r just simple people trying to make livings selling their stuff saying few good things n being polit , so what’s wrong in it. Reading the article seems like the writer has first time in his life seen prostitutes, drugs, poverty, bad politics, bad infrastructure n so on that too just in Nepal. Braw come on wake up c the world around u n Nepal is no exception. I would like to say Nepal is not the best but not the worst too as potrayed in ur article. Tnnx

  4. kia Avatar

    I am glad I waited to read this once you had your second Nepalese post up. You are learning some down and dirty about the world quick. The Nepalese infrastructure is a cruel place and their government needs to be in full swing quick to better learn to manage their tourism and environment. This is hard with so much in-fighting (including actual physical in-fighting). I am not saying eco-tourism is an absolute path either, just look at the houses of underage/forced prostitution that quickly pop up in even the most eco-touristy places with infrastructure.
    When I worked with the Forest Service in southern Oregon I knew some members of the ex-pat Nepalese community. One was a souvenir picked up off Annapurna by someone trying to climb it that got sick (she was his nurse). Another was another quick marriage of a friend – a souvenir picked up for his friend. Both women were not happy in their marriages. The third was a boy, their “little brother” who they took with them because the fighting and government upheaval affected him directly. They all basically fled for a reason.
    America also has its ills, but it is easier to hide them when you live in a place like Boulder. I hope overall you did not find your trip a waste of time or money. Sadly Nepal is a lot of the world, in some way they are lucky that people want to flock there.

  5. Misery Avatar
    Misery

    So you went to Nepal, had a miserable time, thought the place was decadent, covered in trash, the society was in decay, and the evidence we have is some shots of beautiful, rustic, rural Nepal, your smiling face (which betrays not a hint of angst) and a picture of some trash on the ground. I’m saying that for all your complaints (and there were many), your photos provide a starkly different image of the country.

  6. Jonny Goldstein Avatar
    Jonny Goldstein

    Hey Andrew,

    I keep coming back to look at the comments. Here is an idea—If you ever decide to go back to Nepal, do some research first about volunteer opportunities….That’s a good way to spend some time in a community in a way that gets you outside the commercial bubble. I helped build a home in Guatemala, and I am glad I did. And if there is something you are particularly sickened by…say child mortality or child labor…maybe there’s something you can do on that front. Be a guest conversationalist in a 7th grade english language class….something like that.

    Another possibility—go and study something. Go study an art form in an artists studio or find a botany student at the local university to teach you about the plants or something. I’m just spilling out random ideas.

    Just trying to find some ways you might be able to bust out of the tourist frame.

    Peace,

    Jonny

  7. Respect Avatar
    Respect

    Very sad to hear of your “tragedy” in Nepal. You truly have no positive outlook and a criticism riddled with disdain for something you will never fully understand. It is these sentiments that you harbor which will never allow one to see the real beauty of a place, people and culture like Nepal. A month in and around major municipalities in one of the poorest countries in the world, with what seems like no prior research or read-up on the historical timeline of the country would surely cause one to come back with a sensibility like yours. Of course your’e disappointed, you have just experienced one of the most dismal human conditions on the planet yet you have neglected to see the other side of the story. It is not your fault and I understand that. I would suggest you begin to entertain the value of equity in your view and understanding of things, for if you do not, disappointment will continue to permeate your way of life.

  8. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Nice pictures to start off. Good work.

    I am from Nepal but am currently living in the US and have traveled to a fair number of countries, among which I liked New Zealand the best. I appreciate that you noticed during your travel in Nepal what you describe here. You have a good heart, man. It is indeed painful to see child workers in construction. Ideally, we would like them to go to school, get a good education and then a job, right?

    Marijuana and prostitution exist in Nepal because there is a demand for it. That’s the law of economics. If tourists demand a service, someone will always step to provide if a profit can be made. Now they cannot just know who is looking for what by merely looking at a tourist’s face. Besides, your depression was not caused not because you landed in a developing country but because you were alone and had no one to talk to you. If you talk to locals, they will certainly tell you that their life is miserable and terrible so that you would feel pity for them and throw some cash on them. When you meet someone who has less than you, they will act that way. Not a surprise, man.

    What do you expect to see on a trail? Yetis? It’s a freakkin trail and you’re only going to enjoy it if you have someone to talk to while you are hiking. Anyway, you have good observant eyes. You should channel your energetic dissent for something positive. You could probably go to a developing country as a social worker. You can a lot good that way.

    About your suggestion to stop tourism in Nepal, think of it this way. We all know foreign aid creates dependence and does not solve a country’s problems and most of it is embezzled by leaders. But if foreign aid were to be halted completely, can you imagine how many thousands or maybe even millions will die of hunger and diseases?

    Your expectations of a serene Himalayan Shangrila was not met, I understand. But why would you expect Nepal to be a traditional sanctuary untouched by outside influence and Nepalese to be ‘noble savages’?

    Think about all these and reflect on your experience. To me, it seems like you had never seen what a developing country looks like. Your shock is palpable in your descriptions. Lots of foreigner go to visit Nepal because they have never seen that kind of poverty. Your descriptions are valuable, nonetheless. Nepal is not a paradise. And no one is claiming it is.

  9. Mandy Avatar
    Mandy

    I’ve been enjoying your blog for awhile now, but have never commented on a post. This post, however, deserves a comment and a thank you.

    My husband went to Nepal in December for a conference through CU. He came home with many beautiful pictures and a lot of sad, sad stories. When I showed him your post, he said, “That’s exactly how I felt.” Before reading your post, I think he felt guilty–so many people expressed jealousy over his trip and, though he had traveled to poor countries before, he had a hard time explaining his experiences in Nepal to them. So thank you so much for sharing.

    There’s a book coming out next week about Nepal that I think you will really enjoy. It’s called Little Princes and it’s by Conor Grennan. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_mehH6P72as

  10. mmmmmm Avatar
    mmmmmm

    Isn’t ‘real’ brand stuff probably made by kids too?

  11. Glimmerofhope Avatar
    Glimmerofhope

    First of all thanks for going to Nepal. I completely agree with you. I am 22, not been home since three 3 and a half years. Everytime i hear of home, i still think of that Kathmandu which was silent that in some places, people were afraid of wild animals such as wolves, and foxes which wandered through the streets. When i hear of home, I still think about the time when i could drink water direct from the stone-tap which you might have seen.
    Its not only the old people who say Kathmandu has changed. I was born and bred in KTM and good Lord have i seen it changed. I have seen fields replaced by houses, trees by cement and air by toxic gas.
    I do not blame anyone, but ourselves for destroying the atmosphere. It is not because there are many uneducated people. NO, its because there are such lazy assholes, who find it hard to take a few stops to throw the wrapper in the bin. The problem lies in that Nepal has always been dependent on tourism for its income. And people started to take this fact for granted. They thought that anything they do and everything they do will not change it. But alas, it has.
    I feel sad for my people that the politicians are nothing but money sucking sponges. You cannot get through the govt. offices easily without bribes. You need external source to get jobs. Your grades/experience is only but a paper to them.
    But, i know and i believe that my generation will be able to do something. I do not hope for much. Neither do i expect that we will make Nepal as beautiful as it was 20 years ago, nor will i be expect that people will change their mentalities. But i hope and pray to a God i do not believe in that we will atleast bring about a change. I hope. Amen!

  12. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    “Our great Western civilization, which has created the marvels we now enjoy, has only succeeded in producing them at the cost of corresponding ills. The order and harmony of the Western world, its most famous achievement, …demand the elimination of a prodigious mass of noxious by-products which now contaminate the globe.

    The first thing we see as we travel round the world is our filth, thrown into the face of mankind.

    So I can understand the mad passion for travel books and their deceptiveness. They create the illusion of something which no longer exists but still should exist, if we were to have any hope of avoiding the overwhelming conclusion that the history of the past twenty thousand years is irrevocable.

    Mankind has opted for monoculture; it is in the process of creating a mass civilization, as beetroot is grown in the mass.

    Claude Levi-Strauss, Tristes Tropiques (1955)

  13. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    A different perspective from 1987:

    http://walkerpub.wordpress.com/category/nepal/

  14. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Going to take some time, but that looks like an amazing read.

  15. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Plenty positive, listed in my other post:
    http://andrewhy.de/nepal-2011-a-struggle-fo-beauty/
    !

  16. Santosh Avatar
    Santosh

    Hi Andrew!!
    I would like to thank you for sharing some of your experiences. As a Nepali myself, I am sorry that you did not have a good experience which you hoped for. I am, in a way, flattered that people around the world imagine Nepal as being a paradise where no poor people live, or there are no problems at all. I wish that was true. Sadly despite Nepal being blessed with heavenly beauty and very simple welcoming people, the political situation has been detrimental to both the growth and image of my country.
    I can testify for all what you saw. Indeed, I can totally agree about the litters and people trying to get money out of you. Kathmandu is a mess, but I don’t expect it better because we are still developing country. We have a long way to go. Sadly, I wish you could have done a better research before going there. I think you stayed at Thamel area and then had a trip to Pokhara for Annapurna trekking. May be you went to Kathmandu Durbar square!!! If this is it, I am sorry to say, it is not true Nepal. I myself find these places suffocating.
    Did you go to Bhaktapur or kakani or Dhulikhel or some other places? These are good to being with once you land in Kathmandu. Yes, of course, people smell bad on public buses. I could not take it most of the time. But, public transportation is ultra cheap:- so have to bear something. Someone, who wish to have luxury of private or better transportation can have tourist buses or even cheap cabs. The roads are kind of ok in cities and usually not luxurious on rural parts. Traffic jams, smoke and horns are the trademarks of a developing country.
    I wish you could have gone to other places in Nepal. Please don’t expect conditions in Nepal as here in United States and Europe. We have problems, yet I think we have lot to offer visitors who want to have a good vacation.
    To all visitors, I would like to welcome to Nepal. My only suggestion is please don’t go for the most popular and cheaper places. No good idea to stay in Kathmandu for more than 3 days, if you want to explore Nepal. You may try national parks or places in the western part of Nepal. It is called “Virgin West”. Try eastern part. If I would make trip to Nepal, I would say no to Pokhara, Thamel area, Kathmandu city(except for airport and some shopping).
    Andrew, sorry again for your bad experience. Please do visit again, but this time to real place. And, please think that Nepal is poor developing country and people might want to make some money out of you. You always have the option of saying NO!!
    Thanks and welcome to Nepal !!!

  17. Rogersl Avatar
    Rogersl

    It has been over a year since China / Tibet / Nepal / India and I still can’t properly parse it. I still can’t really answer the question “How was your trip.” Andrew, this post made me remember back to our few days in Kathmandu and the trip through Tibet and put soem of what I was feeling into words.

  18. A Nepalese from Kathmandu. Avatar
    A Nepalese from Kathmandu.

    Andrewhwyde, it’s the Weed…the F***ing Weed… man. No wonder why you missed all the wilderness !! 🙂

    Peace.

  19. Abhinav Avatar
    Abhinav

    These are all symptoms of Nepal’s lack of leadership and the corruption in the government, not of tourism. Tourism is Nepal’s only economic resource. Without it, things would be almost universally in a worse state. You also have to remember Nepal is in a period of political turmoil, with the death of the royal family, martial law under the king, his deposition, constant conflict with the maoist rebels and attempting to reconcile with them and form a democracy, etc.

  20. Lou Avatar
    Lou

    Would you still think this if you were Nepalese? And I mean you, Paul, with your brains and your emotions and your ambitions, desires, needs, etc. Because don’t be fooled by the media, the people of Nepal are no different from you and I. And just like you and I, they hate feeling needy, they hate running after customers, and they will never find fulfillment in selling their souls like this. Every human being is entitled to a lifestyle and work that fulfills them and that they feel proud of.
    So this bullshit about how we need to help them by coming in and throwing money all over the place is just that: total bullshit.

  21. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    This is perhaps the best comment ever received on this blog, thank you.

  22. Santosh Avatar
    Santosh

    Thanks Andrew..I know you might have felt lot of frustrations when your expectation was not met. But, believe me, there are lot of places in Nepal which can change your view. We have been through tough political times lately. I think they are for better, if you know history of Nepal and its society. I think we will do better in future, and I see lot of better things coming up.
    Despite all these, we always welcome guests to Nepal. I welcome you to Nepal and have a nice time there. Hopefully, you will return with happy face.
    And, I read your new blog post. It was interesting. Although the expected number of visitors is just a fraction of Denver International Airport, it has lot of positive contribution to economy of Nepal.

  23. Kripa13 Avatar
    Kripa13

    I m really depressed how the writer has only figured out the negative points n has forgotten all the positive aspects. Didnt u even meet a single person in Nepal who met your so called expectation? I would just like to say ” ROME WAS NOT BUILT IN A DAY! ” . IF U CANT HELP, PLEASE DONT DESTROY!

  24. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    I’ve written several other posts, please check them out.

  25. Jai Nepal Avatar
    Jai Nepal

    Dear Andrew,

    Your Article is harsh but it is truth in a way… Nepal was beautiful place in the earth and still it has such a wonderful natural beauty and resources BUT due to our corrupt political situation and moist problem it has become the place what you have experience in the article. Please do not have those hatred for Nepal .. It is Country itself which crying for Help and people have no choices left. This is the example of what a nation can be without a true, good political stability. We are not fortunate like you 🙁

  26. Brad_tile Avatar
    Brad_tile

    nonsense gossips,
    everywhere u will get these things.
    wat white skins did is not good, wat they thiught is not always correct, they r not only civilized

  27. Jon Avatar
    Jon

    Hi Andrew,

    I read your original post and my jaw literally dropped. At best you come across as a little gauche; at worst your report veers dangerously and uncomfortably close to “Sheesh, these people…” territory. Although I don’t think that was your intention (I seriously hope not), you do sound like a bit of a numpty, and I find myself feeling extremely pissed off. In other words, I have major beef with your post, and must now defend Nepal to the core.

    I visited in 2007, and completed a 14 day trek with family and friends in the Lamjung Himal area – to the east of Pokhara and the Annapurna range. It was stunning. Much less tourist traffic than the Annupurna Circuit and EBC, and no tea houses (which are, precisely, hotels for trekkers). After our trek, we spent a few days in Pokhara and we visited a small village. We took £700 in hard cash (UK notes), bags of second-hand clothes and pencils and paper for the village school that we had collected in the UK. We presented these gifts to the whole village, and in front of the Ama Toli – the mother’s union – the women who frequently manage the financial welfare of the village – so that they could not be misappropriated. The village now has new class rooms and toilets, and I can say with all honesty that giving something back is extremely rewarding.

    As we were leaving the village, we saw some people working in fields which I was told by our hosts did not belong to them. In fact the field belonged to absentee landlords, and had done for generations. Due to complex cultural and social systems, we were basically witnessing hereditary serfs labouring for feudal lords that they had never met.

    Now, I say that kind of thing is very wrong. But then I come from a country which dispensed with feudalism around about the 15th century. I also believe that this is not something you can adequately change overnight. Of course others say you can, which is no doubt why Nepal suffered a ten-year civil war at the hands of Maoist Rebels who were attempting a peasant-based revolution to overthrow a corrupt and ineffective parliamentary monarchy, and from which it is still trying to recover. The fact that those same Maoists are now working within a democratically elected, albeit flawed, government should be seen as progress, I think. At least they’re not killing farmers, recruiting child soldiers or blowing up public buildings anymore. Others say, why let a bunch of murderous thugs in? But hey – that’s politics!

    By the way, those rice fields are called terraces, and most of them have been there for hundreds of years. Indeed, it seemed to me that rather than constructing new terracing (a marvel of manual labour, in my opinion), many farmers were abandoning rice cultivation, moving to the cities, and sadly letting the terraces fall into disrepair.

    So anyway, on the one hand you bemoan the lack of chimneys in the houses, then on the other you criticize the ‘inevitable road’. Well, right there you have the dilemma. Without a road, you’re a 2 week walk away from markets, health services and higher education. Nepal is one of the poorest countries in the world. It barely has a foot in the 20th century, let alone the 21st. Roads improve lives. They also bring cars and televisions and expedite the rural exodus to the cities.

    By the way, as I understand it, the maintenance of the ‘roads’ in Nepal (the paths that connect settlements in the foothills, as oppose to the tarmac highways) is the responsibility of the villages that are strung along them, and they receive payment from the government to do so. As such, everyone gets involved – kids, adults, and the elderly. I’m not saying it’s right, but what I saw was whole communities working together to get a job done for the benefit of everyone.

    Obviously, child labour is a horrific problem in all countries with high levels of poverty, and particularly in south and south-east asia. It’s not just Nepal’s problem, it’s a global one. (Just like the lack of glaciers at the top of the mountains). Child-made products are undoubtedly available in the shops and supermarkets of the West. Travelling to a country like Nepal just means you get to see that reality close up. More people should get to see this, I think. When a child comes up to you in a street and offers you trinkets, what should you do? All I know is that this is daily life for millions of kids all over the planet. If you hand over money you’re supporting the system. If you don’t, the poor kid may not get fed by it’s parent or boss until it hits its daily sales target. I think you have to judge it on a case by case basis. I have given a few pennies to children if they look like they need it, but I try not to take the product they are offering to me in exchange (although usually they are not to keen on this in case they get accused of stealing). Supporting a larger charity that works to end child labour and poverty and improves education is probably the best way forward. Certainly, the street kids in Nepal are exceptionally tough AND exceptionally vulnerable, and need to be treated with a ton of respect.

    I don’t mean to bang on, but the general issue of litter and particularly that of plastic litter seems to be fairly common across Asia. I currently live in Indonesia, and here it’s a nightmare. The place is drowning in plastic. I often see mothers teaching toddlers to drop litter. It’s genuinely shocking. In rural areas, the proffered defence is that “ah well, all this trash used to be bio-degradeable, and people just aren’t used to disposing of it in any other way.” A shit defence if you ask me. In the cities, the rubbish is scavenged by the poor and recycled manually. I think it’s worth remembering the West had very similar attitudes to littering before the environmental movements of the 60s and 70s. There are a few things you can do though! Such as – don’t give kids plastic-wrapped sweets or chocolates! Have a few pencils (and not plastic pens or toys) to hand out. Explain to locals and guides – in a friendly and as unpatronisingly as possible a manner, and ideally in the local lingo – that you and other tourists don’t like litter! Set an example, by never dropping and always carrying all your own litter with you to dispose of properly.

    Also, in defence of Kathmandu… Yes, it stinks and it’s hot, noisy, dirty and very polluted (and in that respect is similar to any number of Asian cities). But it’s alive, vibrant and unique, and chock full of the most amazing sights and sensations. I for one love it. There is smog, but it’s the position of the city in a very high bowl shaped valley that prevents it from clearing. At any rate, clear views of the mountains from both Kathmandu and Pokhara have always been rare due to the atmospheric conditions caused by the surrounding geography. I still have amazing memories of escaping the bustle of the city and stumbling into the circular square of Bodnath Stupa, and losing track of time and space as I followed the circumambulations of people (many of them Tibetan refugees) and the spinning of prayer wheels all around that fantastic monument. (And yes, it’s surrounded by shops selling tourist tat, but then I imagine a trip to the Vatican involves a hard sell of a last supper tea towel in the Sistine Chapel gift shop).

    I really am sorry for going on so long. I just want to finish by saying that my main problem with your post is that you seemed to be saying to people: Don’t bother with Nepal, it’s over, it’s ruined, it’s horrible, it’s not worth it, forget about it… and that is categorically NOT the case. The world is not a perfect, finished, static product. It’s a process, and we see just a little snapshot of it in our lifetimes. Good travel writing needs to acknowledge harsh realities and uncomfortable truths where it finds them, and then see beyond them. I found your blog via the link of Kottke, so I imagine it has been read by a large amount of people. If any of those people decided not to travel to Nepal after reading it – that would truly be a tragedy. Nepal needs those tourist dollars! It needs people to engage with it at all levels. There IS redeeming value in tourism, if tourists behave responsibly. As a travel blogger with an audience, you have a responsibility to promote responsible tourism. As it is, in your blog post you sound just like the whining tourists you profess to hate.

    I’d like to recommend the film “Journey of the Red Fridge” to you. It is a really excellent documentary about the obstacles Nepal is seeking to overcome as it faces the challenges of globalisation and development. You can watch the trailer here:

    http://www.lunamdocs.com/

    I had a skip through the rest of your blog. I’m glad you were able to get something out of your trip in the end and experience the wilderness and get close to the mountains. Well done! I see you skipped back to the States for a well earned break, but I hope you continue your travels and wish you the best of luck with them.

  28. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    You know what? Nepal is not your museum or your portal to a fantasy of the past.

    Nepalese people want iPods and sneakers and birth control and blue jeans and chocolate and motorbikes and elevators and education and dental care and driveways and nice toilet paper JUST AS MUCH as anyone else on the planet. Who are you to say they need to stay pristine and unsullied by the modern world? So many tourists want indigenous people to live in earthen huts and burn yak dung and keep to traditional ways and remain uneducated and poor just so people like you can come along and inhale the romantic “authenticity,” “wildness,” and “purity” of their lives.

    Those power lines you hate seeing? They provide heat and light for people who’ve only had open flames for most of their lives. Those child labor jobs you despise? They can be the best financial opportunity any family in that region has ever seen. “Soulless?” You’re just looking for the soul in the wrong place — it’s in the future of a Nepalese kid, not some ghost of the past.

  29. Paul Avatar

    The sad truth is, tourism supports development, development causes more pollution, more trash, more infrastructure. Every third world country is going through the same thing.

    You have to look at it through their eyes too. Although it may be “traditional” and “cute” to us to see a village with no running water, people living like they were 400 years ago, don’t you think the young people want a 42″ LED when they see it?

    Look at the industrial revolution in England and early 1800s in the US. Same thing in terms of pollution, exploitation, etc. etc.

  30. Suneetabb Avatar
    Suneetabb

    well … very intresting !!! read the article and the comments… different perceptions and different views !! i have no suggestions or comments but visiting Nepal is a one life time massive experence which i beleive every1 in the world should have !!! yr life is simply not complete without visiting Nepal…u shd experience its positives and negatives and understand the differences and it will definately make u a better and a very down to earth person !!!

  31. Cool Avatar
    Cool

    I agree with comment by Rob. Yes, there are lot of problems can be seen in this country and most of them are because of lack of education specially in the village people and children in the rural areas specially.

    Like Rob said, road is the key to development of the country and area so it is necessity to build road for the development of Manang and Mustang and people live there. Obviously there are alternative trails even in Annapurna Circuit route which could be chosen for trekking and most beautiful scenery could be seen but Mr. Andrew didn’t think about that. If he was preferred to trek in Annapurna Circuit trek then he had to and has to accept the changes also.

    Is it necessary that the people in Manang and Mustang have to live their life without the access of road? Do they have to be away from Flatroon TV? Don’t they have right to watch TV and programmes? Don’t they have write to use electricity? Only the people from developed countries have rights to use the facilities? Can’t Nepal progress in development?

    Well I’m in Nepal’s tourism industry for 10 years and agreed with the points of Mr. Andrew articles but we at the same time building an alternative trails and development together. You may have seen only worse part of country but we have gain a lot also.

    On the other hand, I suggest you to use good words only in the article, well it is your personal blog may be but it becomes public now, the word you use start with f…. may be common and civilised in your western world but we Nepali (99%) can not digest this sort of word using in public articles, specially can’t accept in the topic of Nepal. We love our country.

    I agree we have lot of pollution in Nepal, politically instability for long time, specially after a decade long civil war. Country is in peace process now but there is still lot of misunderstanding but it is sorting out positively day by day. If you go back to 50/100 years then there were also lot of problems in developed world, there were also lot corruption, unstable A tourist stay in Nepal for 2/3 weeks can’t analyse the situation of Nepal better, so it is better not to define our tourism year campaign negatively.

    And, if you want respect then respect Nepal, Nepali people and Nepali culture and traditions and respect our development process also.

    And yes, we can’t see much tourist in December / January in Annapurna Circuit because this time is considered as off season. If you trek there in September – November and March to May then you can see more, and of course more a less 50000 trekkers still trekking in Annapurna Area. We can’t see much snow even in winter in the Himalayas and we all realised that it is because of global warming and you probably know that who created global warming.

    And this is shame on you that you fired your guide because he didn’t see the places through your eyes, and in a comment you said, you paid him few days more… what is it? Do you think if you pay little more then you can buy Nepalese feeling and soul? Nepalese are poor of course but noone should think they can buy their feeling, emotions and soul etc.

    The world is changing, and Nepal is also changing together with this world, so what is new? We can’t stay behind development in the name of tourism fantasy, the only we thing we can do is development and tourism protection together as far as we can do.

    So, I am happy how you describe Nepal’s through your eyes, but you failed to feel the native and locals.

  32. Cool Avatar
    Cool

    And I know where you are from, what is your background, that is why you are not positive with this development. This is what you learn there.

  33. Summit B. Rajbhandary Avatar
    Summit B. Rajbhandary

    Andrew,

    I did go through the +ve side http://andrewhy.de/nepal-2011-a-struggle-fo-beauty/. I like the -ve view depicts as well

    Thank you.

    I have grown in what you have depicted here. I have known about it, but did nothing but just lived in it. Hopefully, some concerned people would go through your posts and realize the urgency to act.

    10 yrs with weed was awful, but most people do visit Nepal with the stories about the organic weed or so. I am glad you got the chance to feel the majestic mountains and feel of tranquility, I always loved those fresh breath. Those are things I feel profound and miss while my stay @ US.
    Corruption is gearing fast in Nepal. Political instability is killing it all , I guess. Money for the development draining to pockets of unworthy. I wish you get to go visit some government office for local day to day work, and meet few political leaders and post about your visits. They really need some tight kick in the ass. Add Avas Karma in facebook. He works in a national daily. May be he might be able to reach out your voice to the concerned. Overall view, Great Post , Applause. Thanks.
    Peace..

  34. Kevin Revolinski Avatar

    Things Fall Apart – Chinua Achebe. Same, same, but different. I’m not sure what we expect from humanity. It delivers much the same, good and bad, since a long way back. History… is a nightmare from which I’m trying to wake.

  35. Matt Cullen Avatar

    I’m not surprised by the negative reactions to the article. And I’m glad you had the courage to post it. After what I had been told about the country by others I went to Nepal with high expectations. I came away feeling incredibly saddened and disappointed. However, telling anyone this almost universally meant being seen as intolerant of the country, people and culture.

    After a month there I was just tired of people trying to take advantage of me. There was literally only a single person we met while we were there that I fully trusted. Even our guide exaggerated the bus fare between the end of the trek and Pokhara (by a multiple of three) with the intent of pocketing the remainder after buying tickets. It’s exhausting.

    The pollution is just horrific. There’s constant noise and air pollution in the cities. Then on the trails there is constant litter. Where trash was collected, it was often just dumped behind the teahouses. The rivers are beautiful, but the toilets in the teahouses drain directly into them.

    That leaves the culture, which seemed to be the big reason for going. But all of those towns and teahouses along the circuit are there because of the circuit. It’s like trying to expose yourself to Mexican culture by staying at an all-inclusive resort on the beach.

    There’s no point continuing really, you covered it all really, really well. I get quite a few visitors on my site that check out my packing list for the circuit, and I’m going to put a link to your article at the top of that post.

  36. Syakne ka Poi Avatar
    Syakne ka Poi

    Andrew,
    Thank you for sharing your views and expression. Well in the entire trip i would put it as firstly you getting a cultural shock and then being naive and offensive enough to push your agony to the people, culture and finally the government. On the government part yes i would agree that it has been an issue for some time now in the country.

    But, did you ever place yourself into the shoes of the people who were being benefited by your visit. The life that you saved and the lives sustained by your visit. You call it Tourism destroying the country. You are well aware of Nepal being a developing nation and it’s major economic source being Tourism and Agriculture. As one of the friends above said, you could even be mobbed by a gang in NY or be offered drugs in sub-way and your visit you expect paradise in the city that is highly influenced by Western Culture.

    Your reaction came as a surprise to me as it was to you. You are trying to influence the silver lining of the country on which almost 30% of population of the company resides. You were dis heartened, upset or whatever words you put in, we living in a developing country understand the pain of another developing nation. If you had so much of pain, rather than posting such articles, did you ever think on helping those kids you saw on your trail.Think on it man!!!! You never know.

  37. shekhar Avatar
    shekhar

    the article above is quite right in some subjects but there are some positive aspects infact lots of positive aspects which could be figured out mr. aundrey during this visit. we have come upto historic transformation in these recent years..there used to be gunfires 6 years ago in those village and its far more better place now. and about prostitition..where the hell dont you find the prostitution is there any place in the world?? i hope that is very dissapointing looking at the viewing prospect. lot of tourist places like holland. bankok, malasia and even london has the higher rate of prostitution than in nepal. Nepal is leaping its steps forwards and this majestic nepal was never dead and nor will be.. it had slept for moments to be more brighter and more majestic…

  38. Cool Avatar
    Cool

    Thats normal, people won’t work for free.

  39. praasna Avatar
    praasna

    i agree with u …although nepal is economically n politically poor but its naturally very rich …..its very beautiful n ppl r very nice too .

  40. WhiteOrchid Avatar
    WhiteOrchid

    Hi Andrew,

    Thanks for the post. I understand your angst more so from the perspective of a person who loves the wilderness like you do. I agree having to trek on the road after travelling all the way to Nepal must have been a real dampener. Well, my views are close to Santosh even though I am not from Nepal (though I hail from a place called Darjeeling in India where we too speak Nepali). I would suggest people (read trekkers) to skip the most popular routes as it would more or less would have got commercialized (which in itself is not a bad thing if done the right way!) and touch base with fellow trekkers who would be able to help you with he off-the-beaten-track trekking trails and tales :).

    I recommend you the trek past the Singalila ridge in Darjeeling and then follow the trail to reach Goechela pass in Sikkim. Had trekked there a few years ago…Oh! I too had moments like you did of Grrrr….back then but overall had enjoyed the trail.

    Not much of a writer but having been egged on (pun intended) by friends ended up writing a long travelogue about the trek..more of a ramble you would say – http://darjeelingnews.net/forumdarjeeling/viewtopic.php?t=2651&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=80

    Cheers!

    Uts

  41. Jamanta Avatar
    Jamanta

    Don’t you think that it’s stupid to say “Stop visit Nepal”. Help to become it better if you can’t leave it alone, don’t destroy. Why are you actually travelling around the world, if you can’t embrace it’s true colours? Here, I want you to keep yourself in their position and think what it would be like. You can’t just say this and that just by being there for 2 weeks or a month. Well, I’m not saying what you said is wrong but where’s the good part. I bet that there’s more best part as I see from your smiley pictures. Or is it like you’ve lack of respect. Peace

  42. Cool Avatar
    Cool

    Agreed with you Jamanta!

  43. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Come for the mountains and get smog and child labor, quite a catchy tourism jingle.

  44. Santosh Avatar
    Santosh

    Hi Matt,
    I can understand your disappointment when people like your guide try to pocket some money out of you. But, I think its fairly normal. If you go to other countries, guide will give a fixed rate(very high) of expense for all things. But here, people don’t have one. You can not ask a guy to work for free, unless he is paid enough. And, remember – it is fraction of cost that you pay in your country.
    If you want to pay the fixed bus fare or other expense, I think you can directly go to the service and get your ticket done at the fair price.
    I agree with you on pollution.

  45. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Amazing comment. I stopped reading halfway through because I catch the drift.

    If you look at my arguments, I’m not saying it is unsafe or have any complaints about political policy.

    I have issues with the dissolving thought of wilderness and the (enough to ground a plane) pollution so close to it.

  46. NULL Avatar
    NULL

    Man, the mountains are still there. They just aren’t hiding the bleak living conditions as well anymore.

    Rural poverty all over the world (US included) means this: malnourishment, ignorance, disease, and isolation.

    It means a kid dying from something simple but deadly like diphtheria that goes untreated.

    It means pain, from toothaches to slipped disks to minor birth defects to hernias to untreated wounds to burns — none of which would be a big deal in a Western clinic.

    It means a 14 year old woman dying in childbirth in a hut on the dirt floor covered in goat shit.

    It means people laboring to exhaustion every day of their life, who can’t read, who believe in amulets and charms and witchcraft, who are never in their lives going to travel more than 20 miles from the place in which they were born.

    Would you really rather impose these conditions on the people of Nepal?

    And by they way, child labor has been in Nepal and everywhere for centuries; it just used to be picturesque or hidden behind factory/barn walls.

    You know, I get what you mean — I get that sustainable ecological practices and an efficient police force and human rights law enforcement would be much more in Nepal’s long term interest. But you cannot take away the autonomy and right to choose modernity from any groups of people. You might be a benevolent dictator. But you’d still be a dictator.

    You might be more pleased with Bhutan.

  47. Cameradada Avatar
    Cameradada

    Andrew what kind of preparation did ya do before embarking this epic journey to Nepal? You could have got Nepal statistics easily from worlbank and other institution, this should atleast give you some picture in your head what Nepal is really like.
    I agree on things you have said. I have not been there for almost 3 years. I do not want to discuss about economics coz it would go on forever.

    I just want to say there are people who knows worst things about Nepal than you did in couple of weeks. I can tell them Nepal is bad-bad and bad but they go in spite of all that things. It’s just like coconut outer shell, its hard to break in but if you have good tools and smart it all too easy and enjoy the lovely juice and the coconut.

    Andrew, overall Nepal isn’t that bad place, it is what it is. We must do our homework and find much info about that country as much as possible.

    Perhaps country similar to Switzerland might me an ideal destination for ya mate.

  48. Santosh Avatar
    Santosh

    Sure, Bhutan is one option. It has natural beauty, although it does not have the highest Himalayas. Still, it is a good option when we consider sparse population and more of uninhabited land. After all, they made around 0.2 million Bhutanese citizens of Nepali origin flee from their own country. It should be clean and orderly place full of puppets, unlike Nepal where people crave for democracy and are more hospitable to visitors.

  49. Tony C. Avatar
    Tony C.

    I took the Pokhara to Muktinath trek – hold on to your hats – in 1978. As you might expect, while poverty was certainly a feature of the landscape back then, the trail was virtually unspoiled. The natural beauty was breathtaking, and pollution was not yet a notable factor.

    The people were wonderful, and I have extremely fond memories of the journey.

    The unfortunate dynamic, on which the author reports, is found in countless places across the globe. Once unspoiled, beautiful, remote destinations, are almost invariably degraded by commercial pressures. And of course, the poorer the country, the more distorted and messy the commercialization tends to be.

    My advice to those travelling these days is to seek out the relatively unexplored parts of the world (yes, there are some), and find beauty in less obvious destinations.

  50. Neelima Avatar

    I agree with this post on many levels. This is the state of Himalayas and many other places in India as well, the remoteness is lost and the wilderness is non-existent. Even I had a very exotic idea of the mighty mountains before I saw the cataclysmic effect of tourism and religion(pilgrimage) in the remote corners of India. Luckily, even though the signs are slowly beginning to show, there are pockets of untouched wilderness thanks to the very same remoteness which made it so exotic in first place. But at least one good thing is the concept of tea houses is non existent in India.

    Life in mountains is really hard and I don’t want the people to stay in such poor living conditions with no access to even basic facilities. I want the road to be constructed all the way till they live but the only thing that I detest is how tourism changes people and worse, how commercialization strips the place away of the charm. Now I have given this a thought before as well.. Eco tourism or responsible tourism can only retain the essence of the place while people from outside can still come and enjoy the beauty but I wonder if it will ever work.

    Here is my post I had written on similar lines – http://www.travelwithneelima.com/2010/10/food-for-thought-travel-and-conscience.html

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